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Cool

+Really Liked the sword fight scenes with lots of little characters.

+Really Liked the sword fight scene with crono and those two other doods

+Liked the fight scene with Magus

-Kind of disliked all the reading (I am quite tired now, mabye that had something to do with it)

SUGGESTIONS
* More special attacks,
*More intricate swordplay in the fights, is that clear. I like it when they are fighting furiously up cloase with their weapons.

Quite a novel little movie Great work

Cool

That was really pretty,

But It was a little boring

Actually make story or game or something I say.

Not bad at all for a first flash

Nice to see your first flash had a story. I would have given it 3 or 4 but, I think your on the right track so 5 it is. Ok now onto my likes, dislikes and suggestions

+The faces of the man where pretty striking
+Well directed (I think you got your msg across)
+Some decent illustrations

-Some Woeful illustrations
-Animation very obviously relying on translating and scaling
-A not very polished.

*Have less "stillness", try and make things moving as much as possible.
*spend more time on illustrations
*Try to not use the same picture/symbol too much
*A little more detail in backgrouns would have been nice.

Also on a more unimportant note, I think those things had green blood right?

Yep decent

That was quite ok

i liked
+Style
+Graphics - simple but effective
+Character

i disliked
-length
- Lack of expression (Should of been straining sweating I reakon)
-Length

Suggestions
* Keep it up
* Make it longer
* Think up a few clever gags and put them in

Wasnt that fantastic

I found it boring, its a silly little song with silly little things happening. I think I would have given it a 3/10 had it not been for the preloader....mabye Im just a freak, everyone else seemed to love it, I dunno, not much happens

Pretty good for how short it was

nice, short, pointless

I liked
+ The directing/coregraphy (Spelling!??!)
+ Sound
+ Swords

I didnt like
- The way the Blasts of energy where drawn
- The Jumpyness of some parts of the animation

I would say have a look at
* using solid colour
* Better Character design
* Better Special Effects

In fact I would recomend redoing the same movie attending to all the areas I suggested. That way you could also give the animation and fight scene a little more polish. You never know you might get carried away and end up having a totally redone fight scene, new characters, an in depth story, character developement, ninjas, flamming swords, daemon summonning....mabye thats just what I want you to do :P

3 is a little harsh but it really doesnt deserve 4

There is potential but these are the things I think you should work on
-SMoothness of animation,
-Graphics (use solid lines)
-Length (Obviously)

Keep it up.

Hahahaha Funniest yet

That was funny.

I watched ep. 1 and 2, and I wrote in my reviews that I found the character funny, but not really the stories. This ep. has a funnier story, and the character was still being a hilarious, unlucky moron. It Kicks Butt.

Funny, but not as funny as before

I didnt realy find the situation *that* funny in the first one, more visual comedy of the character. This the same way I feel about this one but since I have already seen the dude cry its not as funny as before.

If you can think up some more interesting/varied stories with a few more jokes that would be a good idea.

Still great work.

Short Mad Funny Little Flick

Thats funny as.
I didn't find the situation presented really *that* funny but I loved that little character. He's so simple but so hilarious. When he was crying he looked.sounded so funny I laughed out loud.

i'm going to go Check out no 2 now

Keep em comming

My review protocol =**AREAS:[story,production,humour,fun (games only)].**SCORES:[Excelling in 1 area, MAX = 70%, 2 areas, MAX = 80% 3 areas, MAX = 90%] **Bonus points:[+1-2 effort, +1 Newbies, +1-3 "awesomeness"]. **slideshows blammed on sight

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